Whether you've been somewhere or not, it would never show in one of your stories, as the details you put in make it seem as if you're right there with them. Even if you just completely made the place up, I'm sure it would still come out sounding totally picture perfect and believable.
Glad John Hart was held off for one more chapter, but I really hope the boys don't put off telling the others much longer.
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Date: 2011-05-31 01:18 am (UTC)Glad John Hart was held off for one more chapter, but I really hope the boys don't put off telling the others much longer.